Tuesday, June 20, 2006

بسببك

بسببك
أنت لست بجانبي
و لكنك هنا
أنت لا تتفكرين في
و لكن أدري أن بالك هنا

الشمس لا تريد أن تمر في سمائي
القمر لا يريد أن يغازلني
بسببك
الدنيا توقفت عن الضحك لي

الوردة الحمراء ذبلت
الحياة حولي لا لذة لها
بسببك
الحياة لا معنى لها

أعيدي لي حياتي
أعيدي لي إحساسي
أعيدي لي من فضلك
قلبي

18 comments:

uae alias said...
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BuJ said...

positive criticism is always welcome...

anyway sleepless .. ahlan wa sahlan.. great to see u posting again.. hope u feel a bit better now.

Sleepless In Muscat said...

uae_alias: and who told you it was poetry?

buj: thank you very much ;o)

uae alias said...
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Sleepless In Muscat said...

your sense of humor doesn't impress me at all and how you apply your theory upon other people when you yourself have no expertise in the field..

i suggest we end this little feud at this, thank you very much

uae alias said...
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GMJ said...

i dont understand poetry, but i still think theres a well-mannered way of giving critisizm.

Sleepless In Muscat said...

gmj: thank you.

uae_alias: your aim here is to hurt me not to criticze me. so i will refrain myself from bringing myself down to your level of sarcastic behavior.

and like i said when you attacked me on my blog; if you don't like it there's no need to say your opinion and let others form their own aside from your biased attention-seeking behavior.

someone post something else because clearly this lady cannot take a hint. perhaps a change in topic would do her good.

uae alias said...
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BuJ said...

guys please behave a bit more on this forum.. there's no need for damaging remarks pls.. alias.. if the guy wants to post then let him post..

positive criticism and personal freedom to post are welcome.. rudeness to others is not.

happy blogging.

GMJ said...

thanks buj ..

hey sleepless in muscat .. visit my blog, the latest post was about poetry (but english poetry) you might find it interesting :)


http://writersblockuae.blogspot.com


what inspired you to write this?

Sleepless In Muscat said...

Buj: thank you

gmj: i will visit it when I have the time. I was inspired by my loneliness and by my 'bad luck' so to speak

uae alias said...
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BuJ said...

This is a forum for the exchange of ideas not insults.

Samawel said...

Wait everyone... I suggest everyone takes a deep breath.

To all of you, uae-alias probably has different tastes, which may or may not make her unique...

To uae-alias, please avoid attacking other people's persons. I know I'm repeating other people's words: But it always helps if you suggest ways Sleepless might better express feelings in the poetry/poetic-prose. Going on... Shut up is never included in manners, even if please is used in the same sentence.

Please everyone, let's stick to some ethic here.

Meanwhile, after reading the poetry, I think you're doing well, and not to mention your meter is quite emotional. I can relate to it very much, particularly to a nostalgic experience I had yesterday to something I somewhat regret (in retrospect) for backing away from. I matured a lot in a year and a half, and my standards have been pulled down to a realistic level--or at least I hope.

BuJ said...

samawel :)

uae alias said...
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